They both watched the show separately but here is their feedback:
Quite a lot of the suggestions made from both Andrea and Simon were good and useful to us when making the video the best it could be. Andrea mentioned she wanted to see more of The Last Dish element before scene 17, and we discussed either having a poster of Jordan Hamsay in their kitchen during scene 11, or a recipe book. We will discuss this further and see what will work better, but I do think it's a good idea.
One idea I had, to add a bit more of a pause between the iPad going off, was to shoot a car (which will supposedly be Marie's) driving off into the distance that we can cut to.
Simon wanted to add a sting in between scene 8 and scene 9. I'm not too keen on this idea as I don't think it'll work as well as the normal links do, but we're going to try it and see what it does to the video. Another idea I didn't like the sound of was getting a sound effect of Jordan Hamsay throwing up. I have made the decision not to do this as I don't want it to make audience's cringe and I also think it won't really add to the humour of the situation.
Other than that, I really liked the feedback given and I think, for this stage in the editing process, it was a very good tutorial.
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