After picking the scenes that I wanted to re-create I watched the scenes and wrote the script from what I saw on the original scenes. Once I had wrote what was in the original scenes I decided to go back and make some changes in the action and a few little bits of the dialogue. I did this because I wanted to change a few things about the scene in order to make it my own and put my own twist on it.
I then gave Simon my script as a first draft to see what he thought of it. The feedback I received was good, but he did have some concerns about the amount of dialogue that is in the scenes, especially the first scene, that I will be re-creating. He said that I need to make sure I got actresses that are confident with learning and performing lines in order to create some emotions that are needed to make the scene effective. When I chose my actresses I made sure to pick people that are confident with learning lines and have had some experience in learning a lot of lines, to help with my drama.
After handing in the script and receiving it, I made some changes to the actions again to suit the location and the props. However the changes I made doesn't change the script too much and the scene is the same with a few changes.
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