This is the sixth draft, and currently last draft of our screen before our deadline day, with all of the changes made.
Because our book needs to be finished very soon, due to the print date we have arranged with a book company, Simon gave us very brief feedback for the last draft.
He read through it, and said that he really liked the changes we had made. He especially liked the addition in Scene 3, where the couple has a break before coming up with the solution. We're gad he thought it worked well, and now, I think, the story is complete.
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